Try to keep the flow. It makes the tag look neater, even for what you're trying to do. Avoid clashing colors that don't go well with each other. If you're going to add text, put it closer to the focal point of the image. Having it on the opposite side of the tag takes away from the image as a whole.
I am going to say try again. My eyes are drawn to the area of negative-ish space between the text and the focal. I dig the text, but it is just meh at best.
Just try scooting the guy over to the center a tad and see how that looks Then, move the text off the edge of the overall piece but still keep it close.
Just try scooting the guy over to the center a tad and see how that looks Then, move the text off the edge of the overall piece but still keep it close.