yet another sig CnC please

[flameguitarcody]

In my signature let me know what you think. and to those who have seen my other 2 am I improving at all?

 

[Lukef555]

Your improving slowly, your sig is too big though and the swirl fucks up the whole thing, i cant tell what anything else is. All i see is a render and text, the rest is chaos, and im sorry but your text/font placement and choice hasnt improved much, other then that you are improving but you need to calm down on this sig, its way overdone.

 

[krophator]

the contrast is way off, can slightly see through the render, fix that lol.
the text is bad/ too distracting from the focal.
pretty much what he said^
also try not to center your focal