yet another sig CnC please

In my signature let me know what you think. and to those who have seen my other 2 am I improving at all?

 

Your improving slowly, your sig is too big though and the swirl fucks up the whole thing, i cant tell what anything else is. All i see is a render and text, the rest is chaos, and im sorry but your text/font placement and choice hasnt improved much, other then that you are improving but you need to calm down on this sig, its way overdone.

 

the contrast is way off, can slightly see through the render, fix that lol.
the text is bad/ too distracting from the focal.
pretty much what he said^
also try not to center your focal