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Ok guys this was my first pic

1)
Shot at 2007-07-03


This is my second pic I did about 5-6 hours later

2)
Shot at 2007-07-03


Feel free to critique my drawings

 

i prefer the 2nd one, but you know what they say, colour says a thousand words

 

i c u like dragons.if u work on them and paint then(probably it ruin it) then i like it. atm it leave me cold.good luck

 

I like the second one. Just, you need more graffiti writing.

 

Yeah I dont like coloring my drawings it ruins them

 

I like them, but it needs colour..

 

Im gonna try something on second drawing.
Ill post when its done

 

color ruins the picture and hero dont make my work look even worse...lol

 

Haha nice,Your dragons are to skinny though!

 

Ok.Well what im doing is taking to long so nvm.

 

there ok.....they could be better though, hey keep trying and u will get better

 

I'd say that you have decent drawing ability, but it doesn't look like you 'flow' much in your artwork, your edges are jagged and look forced, they don't look like they belong, you know?

I think you should learn to shade aswell, just start with smooth shades, and then work to gradients, add shadows, and eventually you'll get much better at making your drawings look more realistic.

You also need more detail in your drawings aside from the shading, adding textures would greatly help your drawings, do dragons really have smooth skin? Try adding scales the next time you draw a dragon, but first I suggest that you try drawing a person, try and stay in proportion, and be sure to add as much detail as you can, but don't go overboard.

It's hard to just take advice on drawing, but you just need to tack on more, little by little. It'll take time, but so long as you know how to shade and add enough texture to your drawings, the visual appearance of your drawings will improve dramatically.

Also, don't worry about color. I only color in my drawings if after all this detail, it's still not obvious what I was trying to portray by doing them. Color does indeed ruin drawings if they are detailed, but it can bring life to a piece which has no details and no shading. *cough*

Thanks, Bare.

 

theyre pretty good shading would make them 10 times better

 

The 2nd one is MUCH better.

 

Thanks for the tips man really appreciate it

 

not bad drawings dnt like first one but second one kinda ok work on shading and add colour

 

second one is awesome, you should color it though

 

Nice skills, lvl 99 drawing?

 

second one is best

 

the 2nd one is heaps better keep trying and dont give up u will improve