Personally I feel the second one is better as the first one doesn't look professional, a rusty/grungy neon look isn't ideal for professionalism.
The second one is better but only marginally, it is very basic. Produced in around 1 minute, text with a gradient overlay, stroke and drop shadow. Is this what graphics is coming to?
tl;dr he should hit up Jiwi because all of the above are bad