My shred style solo

I was jamming in my room on my guitar and decided to record it. Here is a shred style guitar solo. It's not very long. Rate it if you like:

Link ->http://www.loudio.com/Music/Instrumental/Guitar/Shred-Solo.57016

Link ->http://www.loudio.com/Music/Instrumental/Guitar/Guitar-Jam-Session.57569 An OK Solo. It has a few pauses because I couldn't improvise fast enough, lol.
EDIT:::: A NEW SITE

 

Ah I was about to say it sounded all choppy but it was just buffering...
It wasn't bad, it was nice at the beginning, but the rest didn't sound much like shredding though. Great solo though, also, your distortion sounded a little weak, but the skills all there.

 

eh not bad

 

The reason it's choppy is because the buffer on that site is bad. It's just a short solo I came up with. The reason the distortion is weak is because it is a practice amp thats only $100.

 

Pertty good <3 loved beginning

 

Hey, thanks. I like the beginning the most too. I'm creating a new one with more fast shred instead of the metal type of solo. I'll let everyone know when it is produced.

 

Thats pretty good and it had a very good beginning.

 

Pretty good start on a solo. I would continue to build on it in order to make it perfect, but overall it's nice work

 

Thanks, I made another solo that I will edit into the first post, so remember to check it out. I think it's better.

By the way, the guitar I'm using is the cheapest guitar alive so, sorry for the bad tone.

 

i liked the 2nd link the best the begining of it made me think of Leaving All Behind beginning by Cellador but nice job

 

Lol, the funny thing is, I don't know who that band is. The second one is a bit choppy.

 

Second one was a bit choppy. Work on the rhythm a bit, make it more smooth.
I love the bends in it, it almost sounds like you're using some tremolo, overall it's a nice solo, but try to perfect it.

 

Yeah, I was a bit slow to improvise so I had hesitations, making it choppy.