what do you think of my youtube videos?

I want to start making top 10 videos any suggestions for how I can improve, how bad is the quality? can you hear what I am saying? are the videos remotely interesting?
some of my videos

So far I have been told that what I am saying is loud enough and clear but there is too much distortion and I am not showing emotion - I will work on this and try to implement it into my next video which should be later today perhaps I am too close too the microphone? will post results once I have made the changes.
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=IyK7Nzt_j88
10 deadly animals

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ApsB...X3RS6NpDGaO1nQ
10 science jokes

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=UMjnkTkUXM0 --this is my latest video please tell me if you think it's an improvement.
10 scariest places on earth

 

Would be seriously more enjoyable if you could have a better mic and add some humour in your vids Well thats my opinion but the idea is good i like the concept !

 

Thanks for the advice, any ideas on what
Mic i should get.

 

Turtle beach, great affordable mics, very high quality mics

 

Are you sure im already using a £20 microphone are you sure a gaming microphone would be any better with out spending alot more?

 

I think your voice is just fine in my opinion, but feel free to have some life, and don't be shy! You seem very stiff. Get louder at some points, and use some emotion!

I think you would get more views and subscribers if you used correct grammar and capitalized your titles better.

For example, your video "10 deadly animals" could be "TOP 10: Deadliest Animals"
or something of the sort. You get the point.

Another thing I noticed was your descriptions; Make them a little more detailed and make the viewer interested and curious to your video. Think of something to say that would draw them to it and make them interested. Instead of "some of the most toxic and dangerous animals in excistances", try making a description like "These deadly animals will have your stomach in knots, and make you itch. Who knows, maybe they live near you! Can you stand to watch it?".

Another thing I noticed was your channel name. "epic 10" does not sound very professional! Try capitalizing your text! "Epic 10".

And finally, I saw your channel picture. Although I think it looks really nice and creative, it could be better! I'll happily make you one if you would like. Just PM me and I'll make it for you.

One suggestion before I leave; Maybe you could find some music to put in the background of your videos. Maybe a jungle themed song?

I know it might look like I was trying to be negative on many aspects of your channel, I'm only thinking of how you can improve and I want you to succeed and develop a audience! I think "Top 10" videos are very popular these days, and with a nicely designed channel and video selection, you'll be the proud owner of a very popular YouTube channel.

I know you worked very hard on your channel, and reaching out for help shows you really care about succeeding, and I wish you the best of luck!

Feel free to PM me on here if you need any help or have some questions. Have a nice day, and I really like your channel! I'll be checking on it often. Whatever you do, do not give up! It takes time to get views, and it'll come eventually. All YouTubers don't become famous over night.

 

thank you for your well thought at advice, I will definitely watch my grammar and will begin editing right now. I will try too practice to add some emotion into my videos. A new channel picture would be very much appreciated as mine right now is not very good.

 

I PM'd you this one, I hope it will do. Just found a image off Google, put some text on it, and underlined it. ^_^

 

Deffo need a better mic

 

thanks, I tried moving the mic further from my mouth and there was definitely a lot less distortion I also added some emotion to my latest video. my view count has been going up and up I had 11 views 24 hours ago, now I have 67 which might not seen like a lot but it's solid progress.
10 scariest places on earth
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=UMjnkTkUXM0
perhaps I do need a new microphone I will test a few things first.
thank you all for the advice so far.

 

This video is better quality wise than the other one you posted, however a new microphone is really what you need, a better microphone is not that expensive and it will improve the quality of your videos which will bring more viewers

 

You do need a better mic but you sound kinda dull, I understand it's hard talking by your self to a computer. What I do is add my friend into a Skype call and have them mute there mic while I'm recording so I'm more confident. Besides that I thought it was pretty decent and informing.

 

I like what you're trying to do but it sounds like you have a blocked nose. Kind of like this guy: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=1M5Ok8a6o1g

Without trying to offend do you have autism or anything similar?

 

i actually like them