what do you all thaink about my 1st c4d

NOTE: this is resized to 800x800



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here is a link to the original sized one it is 2000x2000
it is that big so it will be good quality when you resize it.
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tell me what you thaink about it!!!!!

 

It's alright for a first but it wouldn't be good for any further use (in signatures or whatever) as far as I can tell. Work on manual operations rather than just jitter (which is what it's called in 3DS Max for this effect, I don't know what it's called in Cinema 4D). That includes-- for a start-- deleting unseemly parts such as the lower right hand part where that bar intersects the other elements in the model. Then work on material. Adding interesting lighting and reflection/refractions makes for a better and more interesting result.

Keep working, what you've made is good practice for the more basic stuff, and you gotta start somewhere!

 

That's some very nice CnC you got there mate :]
Yes, he's totally right.

It also looks a bit plain, do a ton to that, but you'll get it right :]
Keep practising!