blahhhhhh shizzzza

its new



i duno if i like it, tell me how to make it better please.
what do you hate about it?



ps. smoking is bad

 

It's got an interesting look to it, but I don't see how the text applies to the rest of the work. Try to make it more similar to the rest of your work, so that it fits more appropriately.

 

Text looks a little too bunched together, and like VE said, doesn't really have a good feeling with the rest of the signature. I like the lips and the smoke though, looks nice. :]

 

yeah i couldnt find a good font that would look nice with it. any suggestions on a type of font that maybe better?

unless you mean what the text says doesnt fit. its ment to be saying that smoking will be my death

 

great smoke effect i like it

 

thanks man

 

Awesome. This gave me an idea.

 

hah sweet deal dude

 

Is this just a smoke brush?

 

Yeah, i like everything apart from the text. Need's work.

 

no smoke brushes, i used pictures of smoke i found, and the picture of the lips, all the pictures needed backgrounds removed which sucked, the lips were the worst because they were on a white background.
im working on fixing up the text now, ill upload a newer version in a few.