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kinda rushed the mockup part lulz

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You can tell its rushed :P
You didn't bother with the lighting at all. It looks like the tags are hovering :D
 
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Feel free to criticize the actual work instead of pointing out the obvious. In mock-ups the purpose is to show the client what it would look like in a real world example rather than looking at a flat, 2D piece. The fact that it is hovering over the background therefore is insignificant as it is only the tags itself that is important, the background isn't.

I like the rugged look of the whole piece Lucas. My only gripe with it is the fact that on the right side underlining was introduced out of the blue and does not carry over to the left hand side which kind of interferes with the continuity in the design in my opinion. It really gets pointed out where it says costs, people, impact. These three words are already isolated to create importance for them, underlining them looks silly to some degree and unnecessary. Otherwise it's a really solid monotone piece, good job.
 
i dont see any hovering u stupid fucking cunts

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