Two of my newest....

I think I'm getting a little bit better, but sitll have a long way to go =P









CnC please?
Be harsh, I want to learn.

 

1.
Colours = Fail, Using a bright mario on dark coloured background does not work.
2.
Where is the light source, and using greyscale on a sig like that wont work with very dark colours.
3.
Bit better, but try changing the background colours, they dont stylize the character youve got.

 

Ty ^
And I just remembered I forgot to add lighting on the mario one... hold on I'll try and change that a little..


EDIT:
Added lighting.. look any better?

 

looks nice..and i like the evil chicken sig lol

 

The Mario render looks like it's just been shoved on the top of the sig. Try making some of the brushing go over him instead. Also, I don't really see any depth happening there, and the colours seem a bit too 'all over the place'. With a few minor tweaks, the sig has potential.

 

What I like about your work: You've managed to use a general flow on the master chief with the 'smoke' or whatever your trying to make. It gives the work a feel that he is moving downward, which, while he's ducking, would be a move he should be making.

 

Thank you verts, I'll try working on that.
And also thank you vision and trigger.