two new signatures (new style experimentation).

v2:


Stock:


Personal opinion is that second came out better, though lighting is fucked.

 

I love them. As said, in the second the lighting isn't good, it's still awesome. It has incredible flow. I think maybe a small space stock would fit a bit with it on the left of the focal. Still, it's very nice.

 

I like how you used the clipping mask on the first one, but I think you need to put in a good and blunt C4D in the first one above the clipping mask on the right.

 

Love both. really nice sigs can i get 2nd stock?

 

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I don't like how the c4d overlaps with her hand on the left side.

 

I really like these, the style works for you.

 

The second is nice, although the piece of the C4D that overlaps her arm is too sharp, blur it a little.

Don't like the first.

 

I don't see much going on except for slapping c4ds on.

 

version two updated.

 

Look harder. For the second one, there's about 20 adjustment layers for colouring itself, numerous sharpness changes, a lot of anisotropic diffuses, shapes below her made in illustrator, and only about 2 c4ds in total.

 

The colors in all your pieces seem a bit dull, so B&W fit's most of them better.
Try using more more colors in your next pieces.
Also the space stock in the last version doesn't fit it. because the rest of the tag is clean without noise

 

I'll make a v3 and try work with more vivid colours on the next piece, thanks

 

Yes , I have noticed the color and such, probably a lot of photofilters/gradients. What i don't like is the lack of effects, you don't notice much , except for the two c4ds which stick out a lot. It doesn't give you a clear focal. Plus i would love to see some smudging and such, instead of just the plain c4d.

What i like about the sig, is that you have the lighting almost perfect, it shouldn't have been in the corner, at least more closer to the head. What i like about is that you noticed where to put it. Most people i know, would but it behind her head, somewhere up top, but that would totally screw with the lighting on the face. I'm glad you got that right.
7/10 overall, pretty nice sigs, i would like to see more effects.

Sorry for the short comment before, i was busy. TY.

 

lol stealing the stock

 

Look harder. For the second one, there's about 20 adjustment layers for colouring itself, numerous sharpness changes, a lot of anisotropic diffuses, shapes below her made in illustrator, and only about 2 c4ds in total.

wat

 

Filter > Stylize > Diffuse > Anisotropic.

Try it.

 

isn't that just blur