Trying new stuff...

The text doesn't flow with the theme. It has way too many effects. It seems cluttered. You should tone down the light. It makes me want to vomit. It's on very high. It seems over sharpened. Tone that down. Burn the corners of the sig with the burn tool. Focus on those things throughout your future sigs.

 

The depth seems to be nice, but its just to bright and too much is going on!

 

true, ill try some of that, I like the sharpness though its what makes it look good.

I posted it on planetrenders and they took well to it

 

Too chaotic colouring - stick to hues which either match well, or just preset colour swatches to avoid your signature looking like a badly made pizza.

 

Its meant to be chaotic, it was a chaotic render and I wanted to match that.

And those are the preset color swatches.