Two Songs. "Without Feeling" and "Snowman"

Both are rock songs, inspired mostly by classic rock artists such as, Pink Floyd, Led Zeppelin, Queen, Eric Clapton, The Beatles, etc.

"Without Feeling"

Destruction and lies
Pain and suffering
Ignorance and pleasure
All mixed together.

Laughter and joy
Smiles and happiness
Jokes and good times
What are we living for?

Rich and poor
Innocence and a whore
Family night or World tour
Do they really even care?

Sunrise or sunset
Day or night
Death or Death
There really isn't a choice in the end.

Drugs and liquor
Underage sex and unwanted pregencies
Parties and disease
You only live once...
Right?

Body runs cold, hands numb to the touch
Fading in and out
Your mission is over.
Time to pull the plug.
Say goodbye to feeling.

What are we living for?
What is our purpose here?
Do we have a soul?
Is death really the end?
Or just a new beginning?

Tears and fears
Love and hate
Pain and pleasure
Happiness and depression
Joy and remorse
A good life and a bad life.

Say goodbye,
Goodbye, goodbye

Say hello
Hello, Hello

Welcome to Heaven
Your feelings are by the gate
Do you want them? *Them repeated while fading out in the backround*
Goodbye, goodbye
Without feeling
I am now without feeling
Without feeling, are you?


"Snowman"

Bags in his pockets, hidden away.
Dealing the day away.
He can meet your every demand.
Just call him the snowman.

He's got some of the finest powdered sugar in this state.
He lives in the mansion, his very own estate.
Fiends wait frantically by the gate.
The police can't do anything but hate.
The snowman runs this city, and my soul.

*Long instrumental*

*Fading out*
Cause I am the snowman,
I am the fiends,
I am the police,
I am nothing,
Goodbye.

 

simply commendable.
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I thought the top piece was an interesting work of art, but the second one is making me think you're trying to flex a positive vibe towards wide distribution of cocaine, lol.

 

Both of them are really good. I'd love to hear 'em.

 

I like the first one good job.

 

Both of them are surprisingly gud....

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