Some Verses I Literally Just Wrote Quickly

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Some Verses I Literally Just Wrote Quickly
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    Some Verses I Literally Just Wrote Quickly

    thought i'd share some stuff it's kinda like freestyling i just type it on notepad line by line and see what i get as it comes to my head so i'm writing down my freestyle basically lol but anyways this is what i got not a good rapper but here we go

    "sometimes it feels as though
    life firmly grasps my heart
    i feel ahead of the game
    but somethin keeps pullin me back to start
    all this stress and these problems
    are tearing my world apart
    i cannot become
    another statistic on a chart

    im breakin out of this threshold
    this damning of souls
    gona have to be strong and bold
    or so i've been told
    while they talkin bout records sold
    i've found life a new mould
    and while there shit gets old
    my flow turns cold

    it aint easy breakin free
    of these chains of misery
    gotta focus on my dreams of being all that i can be
    so when i go to sleep at night it'll be a goodnights sleep
    i got this new since of pride i thought i could not receive
    it aint easy but its worth it and you can take that from me
    and em cuz without him im not sure if i wouldve seen
    as cleary as i do now a new found release of grief
    and just as soon as satan thought he had me
    i made'em burn in disbelief

    so you can stop judgin me
    and maybe show love to me

    but they are better than me lets ask God if they perfect
    cuz they walkin round judgin me i know ya'll heard it
    so i stay quiet cuz you see forgiveness is key
    especially if im wantin God to keep forgivenin me"

    HERE'S SOME OTHER STUFF THAT GOES ON THE DRAKE - BEST I EVER HAD BEAT

    i feel like when im close to you
    you make me be my best
    and when we lieing in bed
    your heart beat lets me rest
    we've overcome some obstacles
    you culd say its been a test
    but one thing thats never changed
    is that you constantly impress
    everything about you
    down to the way you dress
    im sorry for the jealousy
    had some things to assess
    i let it all get to me
    started feeling depressed
    you culd say life for me
    is a lot like playing a game of chess
    but now that i got you queen
    im bound for success
    so baby believe me when i say i love you
    cuz you the fuckin best




    yup so there ya go some stuff i've done lol
     
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