Think this fits? ( Rap )

I think I've got it all figured out, thanks guys.

 

^ pretty good line but i have the best "fly" lines

 

It'll fit depending on your flow. What I do to make sure lyrics fit in songs, are when i'm writing, I just turn the beat on repeat, and then freestyle. Get a feel for the beat, a feel for your flow. When freestyling if you say a bar or so you like that sounds nice, write it down, and go from there by just keep repeating that bar or so until a new idea or bar forms, and so on until you are finished, piecing them all together. That's how i get my flow & lyrics to fit the beat.

Any questions or if you just want to chat and exchange songs, PM me.

 

i jsut rapped the verse to this beat the beat is appropiate for this also the lyrics are ok. id have to say the 2nd verse is the best

 

you need multis bro...you're structure is good, but your lines aren't...

It will probably fit in the beat if you flow over it right, but tbh...write something better...

 

Realsies, so far everyone I've spit this for loved it and thought the lyrics were sick. I'm always thinking of ways to improve so if there's a section I can work on to make it come together a little better ( lol that rhymed. ) I'll do it.

 

which of the verses are yours? like which is your boys and which is yours