Crazy rap I randomly made - someone judge this

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Crazy rap I randomly made - someone judge this
  1. Unread #1 - Apr 29, 2012 at 12:45 PM
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    Crazy rap I randomly made - someone judge this

    I been the up and comin since rap was an art/
    I aint gotta raise a fist just to tear you apart/
    Next to nothin in my pockets and I'm still off the charts/
    You haters can't finish, you don't know where to start/


    It's all about the passion nigga fuck the fame/
    This for my real niggas stayin true to the game/
    While you pussies sellin out, we remain the same/
    These streets still bloody nigga aint shit changed/


    Knockin down haters and hustlin on the daily/
    I Keep my hand on the pump, you cowards don't phase me/
    Never been a killa but I'll squeeze if you make me/
    Try to flex and I'll have your squad runnin for safety/




    You'll never see me claim to be somethin I'm not/
    Push me far enough and ima dig you out a plot/
    Bullets pierce flesh whether you're ready or not/
    See the fear in your soul when I'm ready to cock/
    Block out the sun with a confetti of shots/
    Wipe off the prints and toss the gun by the docks/
    Then smile as I watch your corpse fester and rot/
    And the stagnant blood pool as it blisters and clots/
    Take your body to a place with a bottomless drop/
    Then grab the dullest knife that I could find on the spot/
    I Snicker sinisterly as I hack and I chop/
    Sever each extremity, put your head in a box/
    Find your mothers house, go to the door and knock/
    She comes to the door wearin a T-shirt and socks/
    Show her the box and slowly open up the top/
    As she lets out a scream she colapses in shock/
    Crying out your name now she begs me to stop/
    Grab the bitch by her throat make her neckbone pop/
    Her arms go limp and now she can't even talk/
    Strip the bitch down naked then I pull out my cock/
    Hold your severed head up cause I want you to watch/
    As I rape your own moms infested poisonous twat/

    three two uno
    bars out the culo
    you against me is like a poodle vs cujo
     
  3. Unread #2 - Apr 30, 2012 at 12:52 PM
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    Crazy rap I randomly made - someone judge this

    OOOOOOOOO, great keep it up lmao!
     
  5. Unread #3 - Apr 30, 2012 at 12:54 PM
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    Crazy rap I randomly made - someone judge this

    dat was one crazy ass greazy story i wanna hear sum more bars from u man
     
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