Sangira

Made this sig for Sangira, need opinions on it.
Anything to add, change, remove?
ALL comments are welcomed.
(please disregard the watermark xD)

 

It's not bad at all. The white hair like effect starting on the left looks distorted, or squashed vertically, did you maintain it's proportions by resizing and holding shift? The main font could be something a bit nicer, seems to thin and could do with some different colours and effects.

 

I did maintain it, but I'm fixing it up soon, this was just one of my first finish-ished version.

And I agree with the text, I've been looking for about 20 minutes, nothing seems to flow as well despite the thinness of it, do you have any suggestions?

 

I'm no expert, but I would move vouches and steam shop to the left so the whole right side can be transparent.

 

Tried that, it really threw it off balance and caused too much cluster :\

 

Niceeee