crit:
- overused blur layer on lighten (or however you made that glowy effect). less is more with stuff like that
-decent flow; i like dark to like and how the shard things draw you somewhat to the focal point
- the lighting is actually sort of ok but the right side is so intensely bright it doesn't really do justice to it on the render
-slightly duotone... you could add another colour in there
basically you should make the right side less bright
oh and the intended focal is more blurry than some of the effects and somehow looks oversharpened at the same time like it has artefacts of something
use higher quality renders
i haven't done this in years so sorry if its a bit incoherent
