splish splashh

For a battle against monkey brah.

 

Little square puts it off, and the text I don't like but then again I'm really picky! Sides that, follows the style well

 

Yeah, what's with the square?

I love the style, but the text could flow better if you put it with the 'splash' instead of just as a background addon .

 

Too much negative space, effects don't really flow with his pose, not your best dude

 

hm.. too much white for me

 

Some areas are a bit too blurred in my opinion especially the text. Maybe replace the gray square with a clipping mask and try to add more color variation in the sig, too much white for me.

 

It's too bright. The text looks off, but the style of everything else is nicely done.

 

Text is bad, square looks retarded.
The effects seem random and the depth is just horrible.
Why is the right side of the renders coat above the splash effect?

 

Personally, I really like almost everything about it. I would expand on the simple square theme a bit so it doesn't appear so random, and probably relocate the text to the left side of the focal, tilt it to fit the flow, and change the color/blending a bit. Other than that, I love the brightness and the design. KIU! :]

 

I like the bright feeling but the dull text totally ruins it.
Try to work on text or just don't use text at all.