spartan soldier

[w000t]

my new sig =p

Also this is only my second sig. Please rate/hate =p

also please leave me some advice/critiscesm.

 

[HatsU]

sucks my big cum covered dick.

 

[desu]

sucks my big cum covered dick.

its better than yours you raging homosexual

 

[HatsU]

its better than yours you raging homosexual

I'd like to see someone who knows what the word GFX stands for to tell me how to control my cock.

 

[w000t]

guys guys guys dont turn this into a riot 0.0

 

[desu]

I'd like to see someone who knows what the word GFX stands for to tell me how to control my cock.

oh god do you really think you are actually better at graphics than me?

oh god

 

[w000t]

OH god stop this bullshit please..

 

[drewskyd]

Lol at the constant spamming by that desu guy. And I may have lol'd at HatsU's comment but I reported it.

Tbh it's not very good. Mostly because the render you used is really bad quality, and the smudges look sorta like u just randomly moved it along his head and arm...theres not much flow. Lastly, the text doesn't blend too well and is unreadable.

Sorry for the hate but it's just what I see wrong with it.

 

[Alteranz]

I'd like to see someone who knows what the word GFX stands for to tell me how to control my cock.

Oh lord. Leave now you ignorant little shit. You really have no idea who he is....

And on-topic, it's quite good for a second try
You made a semi-ok attempt at blending and incorporating the bg with the render. At the moment, you should focus on composition, creating focal points with light and leading lines, and work on the general flow of your pieces.
Text is pretty bad... look at some other signatures and see how they've merged the text with the Sig, you don't want it to stand out over the imagery.