Cnc - First sig on Sythe! thinking of making a shop!!!

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Thanks you for viewing:laugh:

 

not bad for a first sig, I'd made the font a bit bigger tho

 

This is not my first sig, this is my first sig on this site, took me 10 min haha lol, i prefer small name cuz its simple not too distracting. ill make a proper sig tomorrow(probably take me an hour) ill change it abit;P tell me what u think once i post it

 

Edit!xd

 

I think you should keep it small. As you said, the huge font is distracting, and makes the outcome messy. But it's good.

 

ye, i cant decide in the text now:/ ill just leave it for now, but as u can see i did do some editing on the lighting a gradient mapping

 

The text is terrible, and the background is a mess of C4D whoring and splatterbrush/clip masking. You should really work on making your focal smaller or your effects more intricate. You have no flow in the piece and no depth. You almost have the colors right but the focal is a little too contrasted.

 

I really appreciate the harsh response. it helps me a lot comments on the edited version?
here is an edited version, is is better? emperor?

 

I personally like the new one a bit better. The focal is on the girl instead of on the C4D. On the other hand, she seems desaturated now. Try making the color balance separate for the girl and the BG

 

Isn't it Right, the idea it to blend the FG with the BG so the compliment eachother well I think if I changed my "gradient mapping" different on the girl it wouldn't work, what if u just satirized the girl just a small bit

 

It needs something the unifies the foreground, the midground, and the background. This can be achieved by playing with lighting/shadows, by blurring/sharpening, and just generally adding depth to the piece. As it stands now it is pretty flat and bland. Keep at it though.

 

I agree ! ill work on depth

 

Hmmm I prefer the top most one, even though the effects are very random. You could establish a nice atmosphere and depth through lighting, so might be worth trying a burn/dodge.