text could be worked on (the squidge could be caps to avoid the tail of the q getting in the way of the neck of the guitar), the g being lower opacity than the rest, etc.
Her elbow being smudged annoys me a little, I must admit >_<.
Lighting's perfect, or near so.
Flow could be worked on (it's very weak), and the composition is leik, excellentttttt.
gj mate