some abstract walls i made

[master447]

they are all from my deviant i have all the original PSD's for them

heres another

and another

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what do u think

 

[JustWinning]

I like it, looks really good

 

[kovan]

First one is the best,, but i do think you should change the colors.. very plain and washed out colors,,

and also,, all three look VERY low quality.. i think this is because you are using c4d and/or textures that are to small for your piece and you expand them without knowing it looses lots of quality,, try to remember that!

But i guess they are ok,, keep it up!

 

[Noam]

The last two just look like some abstract brushing on a black background. Is that really all you did, because anybody can do that

 

[surj]

concept of the second one is cool, just work on lighting, composition and depth

 

[master447]

i know they look LQ because i cant find any brushes to get the HD feel like when there compressed,

 

[Imagine]

I really like these, and since they are supposed to be abstract I can't really say anything that's negative about them atm

 

[Jooked]

I really like the first one. But I'm not the biggest fan of black and white. :/

 

[Sanctuary]

The first one's pretty awesome, but as people have said, the last 2 look like basic brushes used.

 

[Spraynwipe]

The last two just look like some abstract brushing on a black background. Is that really all you did, because anybody can do that

Bit harsh

I won't comment on the last two, as others have pretty much covered them already. The first is the best for sure. It does have room for improvement, such a solid concept, some of the messy effects removed and a foreground/background established. Keep practicing, you'll get the hang of it

 

[HazzaMazzaGFX]

The last two just look like some abstract brushing on a black background. Is that really all you did, because anybody can do that

Wow mate, ive been looking around and you make some pretty harsh comments.
And the bad thing is your graphics arnt even amazing to me. You clearly have only grasped the basics of cinema4d.

Think before you write please.

 

[MistahNike]

First one looks really nice
The black and white is a bit Plain
& the last one is alright

 

[NAG]

Pretty simple, yet abstract, I might use the first one as my wp, idk yet

 

[Kinaesthic]

Naom isn't being harsh, he is telling the truth.
Honestly.. first of all, what made you think the second two are abstract? To me, that looks like grunge, I don't know if I am right tho..
Secondly.. They do definitely look like some brushes.. The composition is OK, but it is so simple and like Naom said, (if) they are brushes, anyone could do it.