Need Some Opinions

I am trying to do something unique with my gameplay videos.

But before I go hog wild and add a full clip, I want to get some opinions on this style. I am a noob when it comes to Sony Vegas, Photoshop etc.

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=sGj2tKT56iI [Could not get the tags to work]

here u go - superman

Any critique positive or negative would help me out a bunch. Thanks ​

 

It looks nice, but if i was going to watch it for a long time i would want a larger screen. It seems too small as it is now.

 

What Kid Buu said but maybe just for important scenes like battles etc, I like it so far.

 

Yeah I was thinking the same. I may use that as an intro and then zoom in to the actual gameplay. Not 100% sure what I am going to do yet.

 

Well it's coming along nicely so far, excited to see you kick start that channel.

 

Hi Ziggily! It's really nice to see you posting around here for feedback, especially about your gaming channel I have to agree with the others in that the screen is a tad bit too small. If possible I would suggest to remove some of the space on the right of the girl, and enlarge the screen using up that space. Good job!

ps: i edited in the youtube tag for ya , it is a bit tricky, but to do it, do [YOUTUBE](weird numbers after ?v=)[/YOUTUBE]. if you need more help feel free to pm me

 

Thanks guys. I will do some edits when I get home and post the results. Never realized how complicated it was getting everything just right. Plus I worry about "copying" other youtubers layouts when it comes to videos. I am trying to make my vids as unique as possible while still being visually appealing.

 

Removed by the user?

 

Yeah I took it down due to me making a fix for it.