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ima add more this is will ill put my sigs

 

First off you only have 1 effect and that's an oversized splatter brush. For the first, the text sucks and it doesn't blend whatsoever. And I have NEVER remembered text to be a focal point unless it's a banner.

As for the second, same as above. Only 1 effect. The animation doesn't even look real and it's very sloppy.

Work on blending, getting better stocks/renders, and dear God read some text tutorials.