Sheltering Evil [Not Done]

Obviously it's not done.

I feel like I'm overwhoring blending effects. I like how the angel looks but I can't get the demon just right. Suggestions?

The left side is too cluttered...

Too dark...

Text is just a placeholder, because I don't trust any of you. I do text last...

I don't really know what to do with the right. I don't really have anything that fits this theme (brushes, c4d's, etc.)

Too much gradient mapping? (I used 4 different ones mixed w/ blending effects.)

Suggestions please?

Also Tribal, get on MSN sometime. We have biznez to discuss.

 

The text isn't too good, although you did say you're not done. But, the colors blend too much and the motion blur never gives a good effect. Don't follow with any of the bull shit tutorials people on youtube give you. That's my biggest pet peeve.

 

slightly too bright and too "high exposure", if you get what i mean, though the flow's alright.

Unclutter the left like you said, and match the theme of the text to the general, rusty red colour background

Placement's good by what i can see, though some dodging and lighting'll probably help.

Good job!

 

i agree with him, just the left side and the demon there is something missing that i cant get it right now, not sure what to say