my first paint sig rate or hate

here it is my first full paint sig rate or hate plox

edit: revised

 

It's not bad for your first time. I couldn't do it. hes a little bow legged...Don't you think? 7/10 because its your first time and I like it

 

i agree his legs dont look good, i alos dont like his eyes and the text was done in 5 seconds, but thanks alot for the feedback im gona work on it somemore and repost

 

instead of black outlines, use a much darker color of the color being used inside it for the border, it'll give you a better effect.

 

just change the legs and body and it will be nice.

 

ohhh isee what ur saying, i didnt wana use black outlines but it just looks corny without outlines at all, ill add that in

 

8/10 If you did that in paint you're really good

 

if you would read the title it would be good too