Untitled Poem I Wrote. It's funny IMO, youll like it. read it.

Voice as cracked as your dropped glass
when discovered are your actions crass
seven seconds come and go
bearing with them vertigo
none can find the will to speak
til you, attempt, shrill and weak
words of utter disbelief
then the parlor shall erupt
with statements, forceful and abrubt
"i can't believe you knocked her up"


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well it went in the lyrics poetry section but nobody is EVER on that. tell me what ya think of it. I wrote it in like 10 mins so don't hate too much

 

No one likes anyones fucking poems,
So gtfo this thread your in the wrong section Holmes,
And now when your thinking wtf is this dudes prob,
Sthu cause your a dumb ass slob;
You know im right, you know im true,
now bend over trick and touch your shoe;
now before you comment this poem i wrote,
dont do it bitch cause ill slit your fucking throat.

.. Cough.

 

um...great. can I take criticism from someone whose parents didn't leave him to rot in his basement on the computer?

 

Lmao fool, looks like ima slit your throat,
cause someone replied back, to my
little bitty quote; but oh well, all seems to pass;
along with that pain; that you got straight up the ass.
You know what I mean; that one day in the shed;
when you took it in the rear, by a guy named ted.

 

all I can comment on is the dragon-ball Z thing in your avatar and unless you're 7 years younger than me you are a total loser

 

Lmao. Well seeing that your probably a 42 Yr. Old posting your poems on forums, hoping to get someone to say how good you are so you wont feel bad about doing absolutely nothing in your life besides sitting on the computer, and having a avatar as a "s", which probably stands for sexual predator, im sure im not a total loser.

Im going to just stop "spamming" because all i intended on doing was making that poem, but lmao; you have to admit it was funny as hell. Bitch. :laugh:

 

Wrong Section.

 

lol funny poem and... even funnier bout k o stats