Yawar's Gallery :D

^Very shitty render to start out with, was already dark^

^ I kind of like this one, Tom Brady rules ! ^

^Used a stock image^

^Never really made a big piece before, except for aotw, gave it a try^






Oldest to newest.
Tell me which one is best, and why.
Rate all if you have time.

Thanks

 

Okay firstly, stop with the 1px layer style borders, they don't work as effectively as you think they do.

Secondly, you need to greatly work on text (The tonal square thing you do is too repetitive, and slightly too strong in the first place). Also, your clarity and sharpness isn't at the level that you're at in other technical aspects, and slightly lets them down.

Finally, placement could improve, the rule of thirds actually DOES help, and you should consider implementing it.

 

Can you teach me more about this "rule of thirds"?
Also , teach me what type of border is good, i don't see any border on your signature, i'm not sure what to place as border.
The squares were just tests, i don't do them often, probably won't do em anymore either.

 

No border is good, until you get a feeling of what kind of border you can use, but mainly borders take tags down.
Remember you have a eraser tool, use it when you use c4d's.
You need to keep your focal point of your tag clean and sharp.
The LP is kinda nice, the text ruins it though.
And work on your color composition. ( You can adjust the colors of c4d's with the hue and saturnation tool.

 

Thanks for the c4d tip, i will make sure to use it.

What signature are you talking about when you say "LP"?