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Personal Hell.

Discussion in 'Music' started by Lordhooters, Mar 2, 2011.

  1. Lordhooters

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    Personal Hell.

    My Personal Hell





    The Flaming remarks that scorch my skin
    Leave me to die in a hollowed shell
    Nothing left but pain and sin
    But what do I expect, its my personal hell


    From the beginning I was left to rot
    Taught at a young age that a soul was an item to sell
    Bless me father but forgive me not
    I can share no blame, for its my personal hell


    Looking for a beacon of hope
    To save me from a demonic spell
    To reach the top of such a slippery slope
    Would be the end of my personal hell

    I only fail in search of light
    Tried to reach the top but only fell
    No more strength left to fight
    Stuck forever in my personal hell.
     
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    Personal Hell.

    I was expecting this to be a song. Anyways it is a nice ballad.

    If this is a song, what type of music would go with it?
     
  3. Lordhooters

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    Personal Hell.

    It's more of a poem, ABAB style.
    I do have a song that goes with it(which is what inspired this) but I am not comfortable posting it on sythe, it takes a lot just to post this lol.

    Thanks for the quick reply, glad to see this section is still active.
     
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