Requesting a rap.

So for health we have to do a commercial on drugs being bad and stuff. I've decided that a rap would take less time and be easier. I know some people can make lyrics in like a few minutes so if anyone can do that I would appreciate it, if you do post something please say if you found it online or if you made it up (or something like that). A beat with the lyrics would also help.

It has to be a minute or two.

 

Can we use slang terms or does it have to be all formal? If mine doesn't work, I suggest you PM Wes, he's amazing.

Kids, drugs arn't cool.
You're life should be school.
If you go down the wrong path
eventually you won't be able to take your own bath.

You see, you have marijuana,heroin, and cocaine
All of which do damage to your brain
LSD and shrooms,
with these your sure not to bloom.

You're just now sprouting,
if you're offered drugs; begin doubting,
Peer pressure will always be there,
so you need to be aware.

 

thanks thats pretty good, and it can be kind of slanged.. Which Wes?

 

OMFG!
YES!
HAHAHAHAHA!
CAN I PLEASE DO THIS!?!?!

I did one not long ago and got 24/25

 

lol why would you post to ask? Just post the rap here

 

Song: Til I Collapse[Instrumental] - Eminem

Yo, ma name's <your name> n im here to educate,
I've got some info on drugs, that I wanna set straight.

Drugs are everywhere, easy to buy -
keep taken 'em & you're gunna die.

They may seem cool, they may seem hip,
But stay away from them - thats my tip!

Its not uncool to say no,
real friends don't pressure, that's fo sho.

When you think about it, they're disgustin'
No cash, Jail n dead is all you got comin'

Now this is the end of my rap,
remember that drugs are all bad n that!

 

Im going out.
Sorry if you dont like it :/

 

the best one yet, if you could make it a little longer it would be perfect and maybe make this rhyme.

When you think about it, they're disgustin'
No cash, Jail n dead is all you got comin'

 

There's no way Liquid's rap was better than mine...not to be cocky or anything.

This Wes: http://sythe.org/member.php?u=218897
check out some of his stuff; i'm sure he'd do this free if you catch him in time and he's in the mood.

 

thanks and lol this sentence just made me not like it but other than that both of yours were really great. "eventually you won't be able to take your own bath" if you could make it a little longer though, that would help.

 

Legit, choose who you feel is best sutited to your task.

If you want me to put some more time into it, let me know.

Weasel - please vouch for the order I completed for you.

~LS

 

anyone is free to post.

 

Since you told me you liked mine, ill finish it for you

 

I like liquids rap.

 

When is this due? I might hit it up.

 

Drugs, the life the pain the infliction
hunger that never stops a constant addiction
i'm in a constant state but my surroundings keep buffering
i try to say couple words but i keep on stuttering
i wonder where my life will be in a couple of years
lying on a sidewalk with nothing to fear
just a constant hunger for something that brings tears
but a joy of feeling that i can't explain
as it slowly enters i slowly disdain
but no longer scared i can't feel no pain
i know in a couple of years i'll be mentally insane
but thats a couple of years so ill continue injecting these veins
slowly distancing myself from my f-ing brain

I never knew my life would pass by so fast
feels just like yesterday i was reminiscing bout the past
listening bout current events in my next class
like when i could feel and instead of the being the passenger
i was in the front seat able to steer
got caught in desperation i was just a peer
was always lectured but finally pressured
now in a hospital bed my life closely measured
i'd do anything to get my life back
drink the antidote that would kill the crack
be the hero but instead it got ine.(worldplay, heroine)
only a few days til my lifes end
where will i go
motions heavy visions moving slow
i was looking for freedom and freedom was the blow
only if i got educated maybe then i would of known
times up Rest in peace unidentified John Doe.
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I wasted a good 5min, you better love this. I wanted to get paid too.

Edit: $5 donation would be appreciated, ahah.

 

lol thats way too deep and emotionally complex. Thanks for the effort but I just need something simple, sorry I guess.

 

Wooooowww lol, we tryna win an academy award dawg... played me like that...

 

lol what.

 

I want your class to feel ashamed. Lol. Aight man, i can't make simpler than that. GL tho.