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Khroniik · Sep 17, 2013

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Post: Rewording these sentences
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Posted by: Hatem
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I'm doing an assignment on classics, and why neoclassicism is still used in today's society. I found this perfect article on, and am struggling to reword/"put into my own words" the paragraphs. Would somebody be able to help me reword them, or even add in their own information? The information within the paragraphs are almost perfect, so I'd love to be able to have pretty much the same information just reworded so it doesn't look like I've copied & pasted at all.

These are the paragraphs:

Political:
In ancient Rome, politics were a combination of democracy and a republic. The Romans used the idea of checks and balances with 3 branches of government (Executive (government), Legislative and Judicial). The Romans also developed principles of justice, law and liberty. This ancient political system lasted almost 482 years; it had a long life.
As a result of this success, the Founding Fathers looked towards Greece and Rome for political inspiration. The Roman principles became American principles and the first Articles in the American Constitution are based solely on the establishment of those three branches in American politics. Ultimately, American architects and politicians wanted to reflect the longevity and success of Roman politics in their public institutions. Classical forms suggested democratic values, which were considered essential components in the development of the nation.

Aesthetic:
In Roman architecture, public works can be described by their simplicity of geometric forms and grandeur of scale along with dramatic use of columns and common use of blank walls. Besides political inspiration, America wanted to build a country that was as visually appealing as ancient Rome.
American architects also wanted the buildings of the new republic to be breath-takingly beautiful while expressing a quiet, serene grandeur. The order, simplicity, clarity and reason of a free nation were beautifully reflected in society because the monuments expressed such characteristics in themselves too. Appreciation of beauty was also viewed as a vital component in the creation of the United States.

Intellectual:
Ancient Romans believed in reason and order. Not only were American politics influenced but also their ideals as well. Consequently, those neoclassical ideals permeated American art and architecture. The neoclassical architecture suggested learning and moral virtue: other valuable and necessary components to the growth of America as a republic.

I'd love to be able to pay someone to help me, but I'm not quite sure how and how much. I would greatly appreciate it if someone could help me out for free though.

PS. I'm sorry if this is in the wrong section or whatever! Feel free to move it if it is.
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