[Rate] New sig [Rate]

Here's the 3rd sig I've ever made.
Rate and like what did i do wrong/what can i do better?

 

The glow on the render does not help it, the render does not fit in, it isn't well blended.

And the text does look very bad. Next time pick a better render.

 

i dont relaly think the text is good and the background doesnt really go

 

Yeah i agree w/ you about the render, what can i do better besides pick a better render?