Client Load Screen

Idk took like 5 mins but... here it is.
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Tell me what you think.

 

What on earth did you do....

The background looks like black and white noise, and you clipped random shit onto text.

2/10 for the effort to be honest.

 

He was telling the truth Clipped random shit is the picture in the text you took a picture added loads of noise and thats it 2/10 for effort.

 

Dude, if you're asking for peoples opinions on your work, expect bad feedback. They're not asking you to return the favour so don't behave like a dickhead toward them.

The BG is stretched to disproportion, and the quality differs drastically between the text and BG. Theres little to no transition to better enable it to be aesthetically pleasing.

Even burning the edges might have helped.

2/10.

 

The concept is good, but the outcome is poor. Work on using better quality images in future and not overusing effects (especially noise).

 

Also you shouldnt have covered his face with the text.

 

The noise hurts my eyes, and the pic in the text has been stretched and distorted.

 

The whole sig concept needs a lot less noise, and a lot more contrast. Smooth it out a bit. Attempt to use the blur tools. It'll help in the long run.