BW: Its Just War.

Hoopa Hay.

 

Haha you stealing my text idea? Not cool!

Anyway, the face seems blurred and is making me look for another focal point.

 

What Text Idea?...

 

Yeah the text idea. not cool

 

What text IDEA?!

 

im not digging the messiness by the text and gun, colors are a little eh

although good job on the the light source

 

I'm having trouble making out all the stuff, messy smudging and messy effects beneath the stock.

Nice stock choice maybe smoothen things out abit more and or redo some stuff.

Erase some of the light on the shadow side of the focal because it doesn't need to be there.

 

Err, are you talking about clipping mask text. If so, then you stole that from about a million other people before you, lol.

 

Thats what I thought.

 

I dont like the text
it messes up the focal

 

Whatev

 

Text with clipping masks = eew. Should have just picked a nice color of text and went on with that. As for the Sig, the right side has way too much smudging.. Pretty good render placement, but the sig just doesn't fit my style. Overall it's decent and I'd rate 6/10.

 

Ummm i like the efffects and the style of it, I especially like the right side of the tag where there is the smudging sort of thing there, looks nice.

Mind telling me where you got your render?

 

It's downloaded stock from someones PB, can't remember whos.

 

The right side is a little overdone for me, it tends to distract me from the focal, maybe lower it? Thats probably not possible depending on how you did it =S It's generally nice though.