Some of my poems

Here is some poems I made, they are good in my oppinion (because I made them) tell me what you think

Tanglement of love

Forever entangled in a web of love never wanting to escape its firm grip never

wanting to leave its comfort, realitys fade as I hold you tight, as I talk to

you and comfort you. Life begins life ends, inbetween you bring me the joys of

all the world, the comfort to know that I am loved and the dignity to shout it out.

Betweeved by fate, corrupted by seperation, our spirits still strive, the still lust

for what they cannot yet have. The deepening sickly god above, or demented devil

below

has thrust his spear and wrenched it in my heart when I am away, the pain so intense

I
want to cry, for both thy joy and thy sorry for I have you to miss and I miss you in

complexion,

when I cannot simple hear a faint echo of your beautiful voice, the voice I can listen to and bring

Heavenly love signal

The sunshines bright, the days turn to dark, hell and heaven wheither watching or

evadeing they shun us, offering no help

not even to those who most deserve it, walking this world, lifeless and exhausting

Nothing to live for, nothing to hope for, nothing to persue nothing to dream, just a

blank sheet on another notecard

the gods have to fill when Im dead, as suddenly as my life was about to end, a

shineing star, brighter then brightest sun

shone my direction, the essence of beauty and perfection, like a blissful memory of

the sweetest day in the world

somthing that could only come from a movie, this star did shine brightly but as time

grew this star shone even brighter

and brighter, my once dead eyes, eyes that could not see did see again by what

should be called an offering

from the gods themselves, somthing so perfect and somthing so unreal that one could never imagine to be real, I laughed at what

was set before me, at my destiny that I never even thought could come true, looking at this star I see the greatest things in the

world, I see the peaceful ocean and the prettiest birds, I see the midnight sky full of stars and perfect silence with the slight

chirping of crickets in the bush, I hear the melody of all the most beautiful sounds in the world playing at once, the soundtrack

to what will become the best star to ever shine. I peer at you with ever gazeing eyes, eyes that could only be given to an

angel, they are not as pretty as an angels no, these eyes give an even better

ordinance they are as sincere as a newborn baby fresh from the womb and as loving as ever an angel could be, You, my star, you are as forever

lasting as a sun you are as mighty as a forever holding mountain, you are as pretty as the most colorful sunset in the world and as

charming as cupid, you are my summers breeze forever warming me in love, let me tell you, that through hell and back, through the

pain of 1000 deaths I will forever love you, my darling, for you are my star, for you are the only thing that gives my life meaning

for you are all that I need.

comfort to myself, the voice I trust, the voice I love with all of my heart, I am ill, You are my Angel

of both the night and the day, you are my love wich will forever stay, in just four words let me say "I love you"

(Original) Love could be the light

Through blackness

all times pass away,

through light the shadows darken,

the windy passages of life always twisting,

always turning

The spectrum of this world shows us the path to the next

Our meager existence in such a frail place

Condemn us

The gods, they torture us

These frail body's they give us

Never meant to last

Pushed upon suffering and endurance

Pushed upon the brink

THE EDGE OF INSANITY

Only to look up at the light

Beauty blessed with vengeance

Sinistry arose in the light

the body of perfection

All misery ends when the light finally shines

The light does have a name O yes

The name is love

Light the darkness in my days

The spectrum suddenly shining

Showing me the true path

The road to glory, To happiness

This light now shines brighter then the brightest suns!

Now shining brighter then the brightest sun....

Going through this hell is all my shell can take

With you WITH YOU

I can take this shit

This life

This dreamland

Imagination of perfection to engross the deupex

The gods,

they attempt to smite me down to the meager shell I am

The new found light, acquired over time

This new brightness in me

Gods portrayed by deeds of valor

Gods now cower to the site

gods of dark and light alike!

You are my beacon

Light the way

You are my savvier when times they fade

Now....

Walk this path

this chosen road

Although all life ends

with you....

my life has just begun

 

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You sure have a really unique of writing man !
I loved them all, but my fav was Heavenly love signal man.
That one was really good.
Anyways, you have talent man thats for sure.
Check out mine if you want to http://sythe.org/showthread.php?t=665035.
Take care bud and keep on writing !!

 

Thank you very much ^^, greatly appreciated that someone read my poems