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    sotw #4 entry..

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    i like it :p

    c&c please and well.. :) rateeeo_O

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    That's neat, I like the little brush on the side. Adds a nice touch to it.
     
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    The bevel on the whole sig is a turn off. :(

    But other than that I like it, text does need work however.
     
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    I like it, not much done to it, but due to the difficulty of this sotw\nsotw theme I give it 8\10
     
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    The text would be better if it didn't hang out of the sig.
     
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    you misspelled where, you said "were else can she go" it is supposed to be "where else can she go"
     
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    lol like i care..
     
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    the text is a main problem. You have that grammar issue (lol), and the text is positioned weird. 'Where else can she go' should all be inside the Signature frame. Otherwise, it's not half bad. :)
     
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    sotw #4 entry..

    I do not like the text the overall text.
    you should remove the bevel on the first one, and i don't believe the brushing on the side does not go well with the image.
     
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    sotw #4 entry..

    eh, i do my stuff to please me, not the like's of other's
     
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    sotw #4 entry..

    Then why are you asking for c&c on the GFX forum? o_O

    I think the correctly spelled version of the sig, with the text inside the frame, looks better. Also the bevel doesn't look attractive. Overall it's a 8/10 signature though.
     
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    sotw #4 entry..

    Much, much better without the bevel. Am I the only one that isn't feeling the brush on the side? It looks so... out of place. I'm not over-keen on the text placement either.
     
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    sotw #4 entry..

    The text is kind of a disaster, the brush(I think) on the edge of the signature was a good idea but the brush itself doesn't really match, and the girl in the signature was cut out somewhat sloppily.

    If that is true, you are wasting our time asking for CnC to just blow it off. Don't waste people's time.
     
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    sotw #4 entry..

    mk.. ill find the image some..where...

    it was all bright and cheery.. and i dimmed it up..
     
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    wOAH tHATS vERRY gOOD.
     
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    I hate the thing on the right man.
    get ridddd.
     
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    sotw #4 entry..

    hmm... i like it... looks good to me
     
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