Please rate this sig!

[iFr0stys]

Right, so this is the first sig I've ever made.
Please tell me what you think and how it could be improved!

 

[bigk1121]

sorey to give a harsh cnc but its the only way you can know how to improve. please dont take it the wrong way, take the thaing below and try to improve them.

the c4d render is blurry an its placed randomly
the white cut out pixels on the rs render an your skype name
the 3 fonts dont go together at all
the huge drop shadow on the vouches
need to work on the c4d text render
the bevel is way to huge on the bottom text
the design in a whole is unbalanced
an nothing goes together

 

[iFr0stys]

sorey to give a harsh cnc but its the only way you can know how to improve. please dont take it the wrong way, take the thaing below and try to improve them.

the c4d render is blurry an its placed randomly
the white cut out pixels on the rs render an your skype name
the 3 fonts dont go together at all
the huge drop shadow on the vouches
need to work on the c4d text render
the bevel is way to huge on the bottom text
the design in a whole is unbalanced
an nothing goes together

Haha, don't worry being harsh I didn't take it the wrong way. Thanks for the tips man, I got rid of the C4D render, and the white pixels round the RS render and skype aren't there on the file, its IMGUR the puts them there, if I open the png on my comp it doesn't show them?

 

[Jake]

The runescape character doesn't fit in well with the text. And the text under ifrostys is hard to understand.

 

[iFr0stys]

The runescape character doesn't fit in well with the text. And the text under ifrostys is hard to understand.

Ok, thanks

Does anyone know where you can learn some basic skills? Because this was just rendering a text in C4d then adding a pic and some text in PS..?

 

[AmitZ]

The text is a little difficult to read. Maybe change the font or something.

 

[iFr0stys]

So, I've tryed to take in some of what you guys have said, and I've changed it to this, does it look better now? :

 

I'd say 2-3/10. Hard to read and it's so simple

 

[static]

I'd say 2-3/10. Hard to read and it's so simple

Sometimes simple is better, anyways OT:

for the 3d text, i'd recommend looking at it from a lower angle and rendering it. And that blue on the second text is really ugly, I recommend you change it
Also maybe a different font for the second smaller text, above all, learn some lighting effects, learn to use brushes etc. Just become a little knowledgeable about photoshop, I believe MoonGlare has a guide about brushes(...?) Work on some effects.

Keep it up,
Static.

 

[iFr0stys]

Sometimes simple is better, anyways OT:

for the 3d text, i'd recommend looking at it from a lower angle and rendering it. And that blue on the second text is really ugly, I recommend you change it
Also maybe a different font for the second smaller text, above all, learn some lighting effects, learn to use brushes etc. Just become a little knowledgeable about photoshop, I believe MoonGlare has a guide about brushes(...?) Work on some effects.

Keep it up,
Static.

Thanks man! Found your post really helpful!

 

[static]

Thanks man! Found your post really helpful!

No problem, always happy to help, I can show ya a few tricks if you want, add my skype static.sythe if you want some tips.