Kanye West

V.1

V.2

V.3

Don't really like it, just spent a few minutes on it so i'm throwing it out here.

Pick the best one please.

Mr.Kiabin, come shit on my sig please.

 

On the very right, the colors don't blend whatsover, and it distracts me from the focal. It seems a bit too monotone on V1. And in my opinion, V2 and V3 have too much contrast. Lower them to about the level of contrast in your current sig I'd say. The right is the only sort of.. per say, problem with it? It has too much negative space in that one particular area. It would be way better if you'd edit the .psd and tilt the c4d you already have more to the right. Or, even find a c4d that would flow well with it and add that.

 

The colours can be modified - dodge/burn etc, but the render quality is pretty bad (look at the pixalated edges), and the really bright white spot on the c4d distracts the eyes from the focal.

The box-like c4d on the left doesn't go very well with the flow, and distracts again.

Work on composition and blending, to make a signature look like one scene, not a few.

 

Nice sig, and Kanye is a great artist.

 

V2 I say. And.. Lil' Mistake, you wrote "Wes", and he's "West"

 

His forum name is wes, so actually I find it pretty clever.