Pentool flower

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The background and text takes away from the flower. The concept isn't there. The way you project the flower is unrealistic and bland. The flower itself looks okay, but not a fan of the colors and the way it sits there without purpose.

Try working with black and white as it's the easiest.

I don't know how you made that with pen tooling, but it looks amazing. KIU

 

Can you show it without the background?
Kinda blends in a bit too much.

Other than that I really, really like it, keep it up man!

 

Damn how long did it take to pentool all that? Did you use any inspiration?

 

The actual flower in itself is great, colors are only slightly off on it in my opinion. In contrast to Cas M's opinion, I think the background works well with the flower and brings it in harmony.

The text definitely detracts from the piece though. Not so much the flower concept part, but the Reflex part more so. The two different styles of the R,x contrast poorly with the middle part of it. I think you need to refine this much more man until you come up with something better. Inspiring me to finish my logo that I started ages ago haha.

 

Took me like an hour i think? bit less maybe. And agreed with all cnc given so far. Just wanted a quick play around das alllllll.