About the first few: I feel as if it would be better if the text here was off-center. Negative space is a good thing, but you seem to be missing a lot of it. Also, the pencil doesn't seem to have transferred very well to photoshop (different thicknesses, some darker than other). Also it would be good if the darkness was turned down a little bit. Do something with the text, it is so bright!
About the first few thread layouts. They're far too busy. You can't read anything on them. If you're going to write text on top of a picture, at least throw a blur behind the text, or soft brush with white to give it a faded look or something. But I'd suggest just not writing stuff that actually needs to be read on top of pictures.
The last one I do like for the most part. But it looks sloppy you can clearly see where the background image was cut. It looks somewhat feathered or magic wand tooled, and the render looks blurry. The bottom ink dripping/smudging is kinda cool though - maybe try doing something like that to the top!
(Don't take this the wrong way, I'm just being harsh so you can improve!)