Here is some poems I made, they are good in my oppinion (because I made them) tell me what you think Tanglement of love Forever entangled in a web of love never wanting to escape its firm grip never wanting to leave its comfort, realitys fade as I hold you tight, as I talk to you and comfort you. Life begins life ends, inbetween you bring me the joys of all the world, the comfort to know that I am loved and the dignity to shout it out. Betweeved by fate, corrupted by seperation, our spirits still strive, the still lust for what they cannot yet have. The deepening sickly god above, or demented devil below has thrust his spear and wrenched it in my heart when I am away, the pain so intense I want to cry, for both thy joy and thy sorry for I have you to miss and I miss you in complexion, when I cannot simple hear a faint echo of your beautiful voice, the voice I can listen to and bring Heavenly love signal The sunshines bright, the days turn to dark, hell and heaven wheither watching or evadeing they shun us, offering no help not even to those who most deserve it, walking this world, lifeless and exhausting Nothing to live for, nothing to hope for, nothing to persue nothing to dream, just a blank sheet on another notecard the gods have to fill when Im dead, as suddenly as my life was about to end, a shineing star, brighter then brightest sun shone my direction, the essence of beauty and perfection, like a blissful memory of the sweetest day in the world somthing that could only come from a movie, this star did shine brightly but as time grew this star shone even brighter and brighter, my once dead eyes, eyes that could not see did see again by what should be called an offering from the gods themselves, somthing so perfect and somthing so unreal that one could never imagine to be real, I laughed at what was set before me, at my destiny that I never even thought could come true, looking at this star I see the greatest things in the world, I see the peaceful ocean and the prettiest birds, I see the midnight sky full of stars and perfect silence with the slight chirping of crickets in the bush, I hear the melody of all the most beautiful sounds in the world playing at once, the soundtrack to what will become the best star to ever shine. I peer at you with ever gazeing eyes, eyes that could only be given to an angel, they are not as pretty as an angels no, these eyes give an even better ordinance they are as sincere as a newborn baby fresh from the womb and as loving as ever an angel could be, You, my star, you are as forever lasting as a sun you are as mighty as a forever holding mountain, you are as pretty as the most colorful sunset in the world and as charming as cupid, you are my summers breeze forever warming me in love, let me tell you, that through hell and back, through the pain of 1000 deaths I will forever love you, my darling, for you are my star, for you are the only thing that gives my life meaning for you are all that I need. comfort to myself, the voice I trust, the voice I love with all of my heart, I am ill, You are my Angel of both the night and the day, you are my love wich will forever stay, in just four words let me say "I love you" (Original) Love could be the light Through blackness all times pass away, through light the shadows darken, the windy passages of life always twisting, always turning The spectrum of this world shows us the path to the next Our meager existence in such a frail place Condemn us The gods, they torture us These frail body's they give us Never meant to last Pushed upon suffering and endurance Pushed upon the brink THE EDGE OF INSANITY Only to look up at the light Beauty blessed with vengeance Sinistry arose in the light the body of perfection All misery ends when the light finally shines The light does have a name O yes The name is love Light the darkness in my days The spectrum suddenly shining Showing me the true path The road to glory, To happiness This light now shines brighter then the brightest suns! Now shining brighter then the brightest sun.... Going through this hell is all my shell can take With you WITH YOU I can take this shit This life This dreamland Imagination of perfection to engross the deupex The gods, they attempt to smite me down to the meager shell I am The new found light, acquired over time This new brightness in me Gods portrayed by deeds of valor Gods now cower to the site gods of dark and light alike! You are my beacon Light the way You are my savvier when times they fade Now.... Walk this path this chosen road Although all life ends with you.... my life has just begun
You sure have a really unique of writing man ! I loved them all, but my fav was Heavenly love signal man. That one was really good. Anyways, you have talent man thats for sure. Check out mine if you want to http://sythe.org/showthread.php?t=665035. Take care bud and keep on writing !!
