I don't know

CnC it please. Haven't done a stock in forever.

 

remove the tech pixel lines. It's okay, needs some gradient maps to spice up the color, maybe also change the text.

 

there is without lines

 

0.o That's unique. I like the concept but I think it could of been pulled off better. As suffer said the tech lines need to go. Text doesn't really fit but I suck at text also. The flow goes wandering on the left hand side, nice depth though. Lighting needs a little tweaking as well because it looks slapped on and too harsh....it would look a lot better with like a soft feeling.

Not bad for getting back into it.

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That's an improvement.