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I like it.

Constructive Criticism and 0/10 please.
 
It isn't bad at all, I like what you were approaching here. However, the brushing color should have been changed to meet the Optimus Prime's tone. The text, I'm not a fan of though.
 
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I'm not enjoying the smudging much in this one, but as always, your pentooling is superb.
 
thats hellllaa sexy man gj what smudg brush nd settings u use?
 
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I like it.

Constructive Criticism and 0/10 please.

Flow's nice, though there's not really clear lighting, and the smudge on the right hand side is too out of place, and gathers attention. Try to subtle it out a bit, lower opacity, different alyer style or blur.

There's too much negative space on the left as well, you could try to put XS there to even it out.
 
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