Opinios on Portfolio?

Could you give me some opinions of my portfolio?
https://www.behance.net/teznadzn

 

[2007scape]

Maybe post an

 

[iaurora]

I personally really like your work, very different to the extravagant work on sythe, you have a very minimalistic style, which most big companies have with there graphics.

 

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its a portfolio. around 20~ images.
[quote="iaurora, post: 13063813"]I personally really like your work, very different to the extravagant work on sythe, you have a very minimalistic style, which most big companies have with there graphics.[/QUOTE]

thanks. I am trying to learn web design because that is what I want to turn into a career.

 

[XX_PLANKER_xx]

The shade concepts logo kind of reads as "Se" to me. But you did a great job of presenting it. The 3d text on the path is really eye grabbing. Try bury it in the leaves a bit tho next time to give it better depth.

"This is my first mobile app design! I really don't like it, but it is a start. It was fun to make so I am definatley going to do another soon!"

I hate hearing people doubt themselves as artists, I personally wouldnt hire someone who isnt confident yet. Maybe edit the Instagram mockup.

Your website design looks nice and clean, and easy to navigate, but it doesnt really wow me. I imagine I could make something like that or better with templates, kind of nulling the need to hire you.

Wouldnt change a thing with the syke edits, looks nice and professional. Maaaaybe a texture on the body of the site and a bevel on the header but it wouldnt make much of a difference.

I think the youtube banners should be the first thing you see, they demonstrate your skill level better than anything else there since theres a variety of styles.

Is this JW, JJJ or JUU? Again, good presentation but weird font and kerning. (goes for both designs)

hmm... hope that wasnt too detailed lol. kind of went in depth there.

 

[Thor]

I love the 3d Syke Edits

Even though there is quite some free space at the sides.

 

The shade concepts logo kind of reads as "Se" to me. But you did a great job of presenting it. The 3d text on the path is really eye grabbing. Try bury it in the leaves a bit tho next time to give it better depth.



I hate hearing people doubt themselves as artists, I personally wouldnt hire someone who isnt confident yet. Maybe edit the Instagram mockup.

Your website design looks nice and clean, and easy to navigate, but it doesnt really wow me. I imagine I could make something like that or better with templates, kind of nulling the need to hire you.

Wouldnt change a thing with the syke edits, looks nice and professional. Maaaaybe a texture on the body of the site and a bevel on the header but it wouldnt make much of a difference.

I think the youtube banners should be the first thing you see, they demonstrate your skill level better than anything else there since theres a variety of styles.

Is this JW, JJJ or JUU? Again, good presentation but weird font and kerning. (goes for both designs)

hmm... hope that wasnt too detailed lol. kind of went in depth there.

I am not really ready for people to hire me yet haha. I am only 15 an still need to learn a LOT! But thanks for all of the feedback. This is exactly what I was looking for when I came here on Sythe C:

With the websites, I am really on the basics right now of learning to make them and trying to figure out how to make them to where they are optimized on all devices/browsers. I actually have 3 more websites I need to upload on behance when I get the time. But really, thanks for the feedback, it means a lot

 

[Ow 3 Hit]

I dig your Sythe work, really simple stuff is what I enjoy.

A solid start.