+ washed out colours (though that's more to personal taste)
+ choice of colours is quite nice
+ nice focal placement
+ depth/flow and the oldschool factors are quite nice
+ whilst I'm not a fan of cinematic borders, it works quite nicely in this case methinks

- floating head syndrome
- depth isn't nearly as important as composition - generally the tag needs more effects, and whilst I like it a lot, the right side does seem a little empty
- text is quite basic, I'm sure you could easily do far better with a little more experimentation in terms of kerning, fonts, sizes etc
- the sharpness has left a few bits (like his fringe above the text) looking slightly low quality?
Hope that will suffice! ^,^