A lil rap I wrote -I don't give a damn.

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A lil rap I wrote -I don't give a damn.
  1. Unread #1 - Aug 30, 2010 at 3:17 PM
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    A lil rap I wrote -I don't give a damn.

    -I'm trying to find more stuff to add on to it like a beat and more words, any suggestions would help.
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    I dont give a damn what you think try not to blink, you hear that? that would be my glock goin click clock bam!<-(basicly a gun beeing cocked and then shot) this is all part of my master-plan and its all just cus i really dont give a damn.
     
  3. Unread #2 - Sep 21, 2010 at 4:07 PM
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    A lil rap I wrote -I don't give a damn.

    This belongs here: http://sythe.org/forumdisplay.php?f=471
    And it's really short and not formatted, I can't tell what flow you're going for. Rappers like BTNH could say all that in one line, whereas other rappers could split into a couple lines. If you're trying to get it to rhyme or whatever, I can kind of feel you. You'd have to use technology to actually get the sound of a gun, don't try making it yourself...
     
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    A lil rap I wrote -I don't give a damn.

    You got a while to go man tbh, but everyone gets better with practice, there are many many different rhyme schemes and structures also that you really need to pick up by urself, it comes from listening to a big variety of rap you know? well not just that, but it helps. Take notice of what sort of flow they have for that beat they are using, the beat plays a big part in what flow u decide to use.. keep at it, you'll get better
     
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