Peace to war

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  1. Unread #1 - Aug 8, 2008 at 12:35 PM
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    I've been working on this for several hours, and now realized that it wasn't worth it. Anyways, I decided to show my work.

    This is NOT a signature; you're rating my photo manipulation skills, and it's not suppose to look clean unlike signatures.

    You're rating my editing skills.



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    Again, this isn't a signature.
     
  3. Unread #2 - Aug 8, 2008 at 1:18 PM
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    Ok my only problem is that the tanks dont look realistic enough.I mean this by saying that they dont have the right angle find a better render or move them around a little other than that I think you have good editing skills 6/10

    Edit:On second thought lol work with the text a little too make it look a little cooler I mean this right now is just personal opinion but you could say Peace to War and use an eroded font or something not saying you have to but saying it might look cooler
     
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    It's pretty decent 6/10 like the guy above me said the tanks look small and compact and whatever the guy is aiming at appears to be bigger then a tank. I assume it's a human which means hes 2x bigger then a tank smoke clouds and fire can use a bit more work.

    you did a pretty decent job keep it up
     
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    i need help with the tank too
    it looks fake when i make sigs and insert tanks :S
     
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    He's using a sniper scope obviously :rolleyes:

    Anyway, did you pillage the tanks, fire, smoke etc from elsewhere or did you make them yourself? The tanks aren't positioned properly nor do they look to scale though.
     
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    The tanks need work done, they don't look realistic and look really out of place. The only thing I really like about this is the scope / soldier in the foreground.
     
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    Yes! +1 for you. ;)


    I know that I didn't try hard enough with the tanks, because I was focusing on the fireballs, smoke, and the scope zooming in onto the person to shoot him.
     
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    Well get to focusing on the tanks now and make this a really good piece of work
     
  17. Unread #9 - Aug 9, 2008 at 12:35 AM
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    well you can only assume thats because it could just be a normal weapon with default aim on the weapon which looks bigger because he is focused in on it.

    yes you do have valid points but the fact is his work is pretty good just need help with placement and ow the tanks looks simple :noworry:
     
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    lol that's a really cool pic lol, well done.
     
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    Yeh, no.......I totally beg to differ with the guys saying that the tanks look fake.The tanks look totally fine, it's just your editing skills that need improvement;). But keep it up your doing a good job *5/10*

    P.S. To back up my statement on how I beg to differ with the other guys, all you need to do is add a layer mask and change up the opacity this will help blend in the tanks. There, your tanks will look more realistic. Meaning, therefore you should not need to change the render of the tanks unless, you choose to do so.
     
  23. Unread #12 - Aug 10, 2008 at 1:54 AM
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    The tank does not fit in, it does not look real enough to pass the naked eye,Maybe if your put some grass at the bottom of the tank it would look better, Overall Nice try.
     
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    I guess you know about the tanks already lol
    And the text needs some fixing
    good job though..has great potential at this point
     
  27. Unread #14 - Aug 10, 2008 at 1:01 PM
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    Ok everything good theres just one problem the tanks they look not realistic they look fake and floating up on the grass like there 1 pound.. but besides that its a 8/10.
     
  29. Unread #15 - Aug 10, 2008 at 2:13 PM
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    The smoke doens't blow right, and the tanks look waaaay fake.
     
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