New sprite sig

I used [THIS] tutorial, but kinda got lost, so started doing stuff my own way .

One of my few sprite signatures, C&C

 

I thought I posted.. weird 0_o

Well could someone please C&C on this tag/sig?

 

It's a bit plain. I really like the text, I don't like the black space on the left but that's just me.

Oh and can you post a version of it without a border? Because I think it would look better.

 

I think the C4Ds on the right need to be either lessened or removed it you're also going to have nothing on the left side. Just because it kind of distracts form the focal.
Text is nice.
I would have liked to see a bit more effects on the render, but not bad at all.
Quite nice.

 

Thanks for the feedback .